tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post830877786745288716..comments2023-10-26T12:46:18.384+05:30Comments on India I Care...: Truth is...Dilip Patelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-52272872250727208542013-03-10T17:41:51.762+05:302013-03-10T17:41:51.762+05:30Exactly.. but there are many others who use the ph...Exactly.. but there are many others who use the phrase just for the sake of it.. so in that ways.. u nailed itKaran Aylawadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07136475417500751296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-28022533208024205692013-03-10T16:37:30.666+05:302013-03-10T16:37:30.666+05:30So very kind of you, Karan, to acknowledge the pro...So very kind of you, Karan, to acknowledge the proximity of the BAT topic in my story. I thought that was what was expected of. Thanks.Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-52249209783223012252013-03-10T16:34:30.955+05:302013-03-10T16:34:30.955+05:30Thanks Sifar for responding to the content of my w...Thanks Sifar for responding to the content of my write up. It is not a fictional story, it is based on a real happening. Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-27738198753925735942013-03-10T12:31:57.948+05:302013-03-10T12:31:57.948+05:30Sir.. I have to give this one to you.. one of the ...Sir.. I have to give this one to you.. one of the best written posts which truly was focused on the BAT topicKaran Aylawadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07136475417500751296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-73819045550133647722013-03-09T16:07:49.264+05:302013-03-09T16:07:49.264+05:30if some more people have realized their mistakes a...if some more people have realized their mistakes at that time ,today's scenario would have changed,they incorporated corruption in them and bring it forward to the coming generations, very nice story Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-63928049485545609432013-03-09T15:17:46.538+05:302013-03-09T15:17:46.538+05:30Thanx Vajra for appreciating the truth in the stor...Thanx Vajra for appreciating the truth in the story. Yes, truth has its own ways.Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-87466923078983465372013-03-09T09:59:28.702+05:302013-03-09T09:59:28.702+05:30Sometimes its hard to digest the truth and that fa...Sometimes its hard to digest the truth and that fact is justified from your writing. The climax part was very pleasing. Tnq for such a sustainable truth you expressed in climax..ATB for BAT 37...:):) Vajrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05548526483592766150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-63819466731255897802013-03-08T21:42:18.748+05:302013-03-08T21:42:18.748+05:30Thanks, Viyoma for acknowledging that it is not a ...Thanks, Viyoma for acknowledging that it is not a fiction. And there for it is strange!Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-92094452020552280502013-03-07T22:47:57.714+05:302013-03-07T22:47:57.714+05:30Thanks Aativas for acknowledging life.Thanks Aativas for acknowledging life.Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-68284072556031978512013-03-07T16:44:02.566+05:302013-03-07T16:44:02.566+05:30The End of Narration turned out to be different th...The End of Narration turned out to be different than anticipated- Interesting.<br />It justfies the theme- Truth is Stranger than Fiction - as a reader i was looking forward to a Fictional Ending -where everything is Happy at the end. <br />All the best for BAT.Viyomahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09148836292606453449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-43841824963229357872013-03-07T13:34:58.937+05:302013-03-07T13:34:58.937+05:30Moving story. It brought some real stories back fr...Moving story. It brought some real stories back from the memory. Life sometimes is indeed strange...aativashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637505515780080897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-57825774723195122022013-03-06T21:40:34.945+05:302013-03-06T21:40:34.945+05:30The reality is indeed strange. There is always a ...The reality is indeed strange. There is always a great desire for happy ending, but I had to stick to the truth. The protagonist is today himself a grand father, and he had to keep up his faith in what he was doing so that a happy ending could come. It took years before his father changed his opinion. Since there was a big disconnect, I conveyed the happy ending only through post script, and not as continuum. Thanks for conveying your thoughts.Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-43709979792373337042013-03-06T14:39:42.961+05:302013-03-06T14:39:42.961+05:30Kids imbibe whatever comes their way , which intur...Kids imbibe whatever comes their way , which inturn makes childhood the most tender period in a person's life . They need to be treated with love and care so that they would grow up to be responsible adults . You have contrived an extremely relevant story on the theme . Was indeed relieved to see a pleasant ending :) Malinyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593484251880193308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-71203624608763044952013-03-05T13:50:29.264+05:302013-03-05T13:50:29.264+05:30Thanks very much, Rio for your kind words. This pa...Thanks very much, Rio for your kind words. This parenting angle is very relevant, and the example given by you is very apt.Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-31967319682329703822013-03-05T13:30:21.686+05:302013-03-05T13:30:21.686+05:30very moving take. It is a dilemma that parenting, ...very moving take. It is a dilemma that parenting, which is a tough task, and proper eligibility test ought to be in place before one can be father or mother. But we see hounds getting the title easily. <br />Reminded me of an incident in train, A girl child was chirpy and drinking water from water bottle every now and then. with a bang she received a nice thundering slap from her mom.<br />I was stunned. The child's father gave a timid inquiring look at her wife. Child was crying profusely. Her mother commented grudgingly, " itta paani pee rahi thi, baar baar bathroom kaun le ke jaayega train me". <br />Brilliant take.RioZeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00246956315902471176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-23638371405595760022013-03-05T08:48:09.074+05:302013-03-05T08:48:09.074+05:30Thanks Karan, the truth can not be concocted. I am...Thanks Karan, the truth can not be concocted. I am glad you liked the climax.Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-83701034134440901792013-03-04T23:39:10.109+05:302013-03-04T23:39:10.109+05:30very moving, though provoking...i was seeing a dif...very moving, though provoking...i was seeing a different end<br />but liked the climax :)<br />ATB for BAT<br />do drop in at:<br /><a href="http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/2013/03/dont-whine.html" rel="nofollow"> - Don't Whine</a>Karan Shahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12537659275985610536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-22272639485615400142013-03-04T23:36:40.332+05:302013-03-04T23:36:40.332+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Karan Shahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12537659275985610536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-28152885967165135372013-03-04T22:19:22.731+05:302013-03-04T22:19:22.731+05:30Thanks Mixi, truth indeed is stranger than fiction...Thanks Mixi, truth indeed is stranger than fiction!Dilip Patelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218376385233276846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7516740770579504773.post-57806266164203034912013-03-04T19:39:21.952+05:302013-03-04T19:39:21.952+05:30This was a moving story, even though it made me sa...This was a moving story, even though it made me sad throughout.There are very few things more poignant that a child falling victim to the frustrations of her/his parents, through absolutely no fault of her/his own.<br /><br />I was hoping for a reconciliation at the end. Thankfully the PS gave me that satisfaction :)<br /><br />Very well-written!<br /><br />Besties for BAT!<br /><br />Mixi <a href="http://fisheyes-meanie.blogspot.in/2013/03/the-boy-who-lived.html" rel="nofollow">(My BAT entry)</a>Mixihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03929917191909619353noreply@blogger.com